Friday, March 25, 2011

eLearning Activity 3, Emotional Case, Tan JingHeng

What are your thoughts and feelings about being depression, loneliness, heartbreaks, being different from your peers, and having to put up a front? How do/would you deal with some of these issues.

Depression loneliness, heartbreaks and being different from peers and having to put up a front are not so familiar to me so I think may no able to deal with these issue. Sometimes, I may be lonely or felt different from my peers, it did not really affect me that much because I would take it very lightly.

These issues are actually has some links to each other. Like loneliness, heartbreaks, feeling that  being different from your peers can all cause depression. Example, when you feel different from your peers, you would keep thinking of it everyday and it would make you feel very depress.

I may not encounter such situations but I think that the best solution is to get someone who think that could help you and talk to him or her, be it a teacher, a parent, an adult , your friends or even the school counsellor. If you are not comfortable to do any of this, maybe try to write your feelings down. be optimistic too, know that everything is going to be all right in the end, if it isn't all right, then it isn't the end.

1 comment:

  1. There is a structure. Thesis statement is also present, although it is quite long and not that obvious. However, there is reason to back the topic sentence, which is a good thing. Thoughts and feelings are present in the last paragraph, and it explains both side of the story, and it also has an alternative solution in case the first one fails. Reasons are given, but it will be better if there is some elaboration to give the readers a broader information. It will be better if there are more examples to showcase a point or reason. Overall, it is simple and quick, but it will be better if there is more elaboration and solutions.