Monday, February 21, 2011

Direct speech opening (Not anger-related)

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!" she exclaimed. "I am falling, I am falling, I am really really falling!" Alice was chasing after a white rabbit when she fell into a hole. She tried to grab on the twigs along the way but unfortunately failed. All of the sudden, she started to feel warm. "Ouch!" Alice complained as she realized she hit the end of the hole. That was also when she realized she fell to the core of the Earth.

She stood up and started walking. As soon as she stood up, she dropped her pocket watch. "Oops," she mumbled to herself as she started picking it up. To her surprise, the pocket watch rolled. Soon enough, she found herself "chasing" after her watch. Since Alice was down at the core, she did not have a clue on what was happening on the surface. Cracks were formed and massive earthquakes occurred.

Ong Bing Jue and Kang Yan

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